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From: Tobe Richards
Date: 01 Oct 2004
Time: 05:39:00 -0500
Remote Name: 82.32.55.165
Hi Al, the first time I heard your early draft of "Everyone's Different", I loved it. The finished piece is even better...except for the line - "Toby is awkward and undisciplined". I'm consulting my solicitor this morning! It conveys beautifully the central idea of "vive la difference!" It's also a very visual poem - I can clearly see all these diverse characters in my head. Judy, you've done a really nice job with the photographs as well - congrats. Eat your heart out, Dylan Thomas! Tobe